Nah. The prologue is for setting up the story, and I think it does a decent job of that. I like the prologue the way it is - I was trying to keep it all in one POV, and with that much dialogue, I'd be swaying back and forth between Chloe and Hammond's POV, trying to get all the details in. I do enough of it later on, that I didn't want to start the whole story that way.
The rest of the parts (that cover Rising) are more like part 2, but I need to change a bunch of stuff in the next installement (covering Hide and Seek). Hope you like what's to come.
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Date: 2006-08-28 11:32 am (UTC)The rest of the parts (that cover Rising) are more like part 2, but I need to change a bunch of stuff in the next installement (covering Hide and Seek). Hope you like what's to come.